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| ct203, know you would become busy. Bitter or sweet, that's the life. Hope
you bring more beautiful poems back when you have time again. Good luck!
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[双调]折桂令
平生不擅吟诗，才试吟诗，便想吟诗。 谋略全局，琢磨意境，挥毫填词。 恐尽心竭思为，忧着一漏万之。 水绿山青，冶性休憩，不忘担柴*。 *最后一句是“留得青山在，何愁没材烧”的活用 ct203, no problem. Participate the enjoyments whenever you are convenient. Wish you smooth job seeking. |
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will it be mortgage company or banking system (bear stearns)? no worry. no permanent job in here. try to find another job. if out of market, get unemployment pay right away from state govt while looking for another job. this is the reality. this is the life. economy is downsizing everywhere. best regards and best bless, our dear friend.
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| 正在放了青花瓷的歌呢，一过来就看到提起青花瓷。嘿嘿。兴起，说多几句了。 |
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| ：）就像真正的美人，听起来好，看起来也好。此待绝色，正是众君子所求也。 |
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兴之所来，常得佳句。 但是，合境又合词牌的佳句岂不更好？屈词就牌名，听之过却，就词忽视牌名，也只能是自成要格了。 |
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曲牌佳。词意美。人心乐滋滋，尽不唱调中。 |
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very nice, guys. unfortunately the company I work for was hit badly in the market. I may not have time to post in JY8 for a while but will check in from time to time, enjoy!
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farland, 同意你的见地："...国画之大写意，率性而为，尽兴方罢。如为了格式，而扫了意境与兴致，就是本末倒置了。....但是偶尔想 Challenge 了，挑战一下，穷极地讲究一下格律，也是另一种乐趣。" 如果为了LOOKs good 或SOUNDs good, 而忽略IS good,就是你说的本末倒置吧。 再谢谢你的鼓励 |
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xdjdmc,
for your first version of this poem, it LOOKs good; 好看，有意境！
for your second version, it does not only LOOKs good, but also SOUNDs good!!! 不但读起来好看，而且念起来好听！
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